If you would like me to look over something you're working on, feel free to contact me. To paraphrase a friend's words, "a creative person dies when they stop sharing". If not me, share with somebody! Particularly somebody willing to tell you what's wrong with your work. A piece of work is never perfect and there will always be fixes to make, so you have to get someone else's perspective to sort the kinks out.
I will be pretty busy between writing, animation and the other missions, however I will try to make time to work with others on their creations. So, like I said, reach out! It's fun to refine creative work into something purer and clearer.
Contact info is on the next page. Shoot me an email with "Creative Review" in the subject and talk about what you need help with.